Held Within

Your astonishing in so many ways.

Like a full moon on a fall night

You have this illuminating light,

that completely surrounds you

In your presence this abyss that consumes me

within, is filled with an undenying longing

to show you how you make me feel.

Although I must refrain from ever showing you

how wonderful you really are.

So within I hide that of which I wish to show.

 

Reviews

[Deepak Belbase]

Beautiful poem expressed in clear way. A well crafted piece of writing... Keep it up

[MissDragon]

Thank you so much! I haven't been on here in quite a while. I just happened to check my email and saw your review. Thank you again!

[Sami Khalil]

Nice poem. Thank you for sharing.

[MissDragon]

Thank you.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome .

[Suditi]

This flows so beautifully.

"Like a full moon on a fall night"
Wow.

Great work.