who are you? who am i?

Who are you?

Who am I?

I'm alive

You're alive

Who are you? Who am I?

I shall die

You shall die

Who are you? Who am I?

I am you

You are I

One entity

Two divides

I am you

You are I

When you realize 

The soul inside

I am you

You are I

Body and flesh

Soul and mind

I am you

You are I

Bones are white

Skies are blue

You are you

I am I

Author's Note

review

Reviews

[Shirlena]

Nice question mark and the poem too :). This poem is so introspectively woven I actually hurt my brain trying to keep up with the questions (kidding). It has a nice rhythm and it definitely woke me up this morning...I'm kick started now.

[Jamil Isimbabi]

hahah i know right, go get it… :) thanks yo

[Megan]

Lovely. I like the twisting around of the first concept.

[Jamil Isimbabi]

thank you … :)

[Latifa]

searching of identity and a place in this world is a very tough request, your poem is thought provoking.

[Jamil Isimbabi]

thank you :)….

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice flow of thoughts in the poem. I like how you weaved the words and the thoughts. Words need to cause reaction and thoughts. Your poetry did. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Jamil Isimbabi]

and thank you too for reading.

[Michael Stevens]

A fine poem about all of us being interconnected!

[Jamil Isimbabi]

yes, and also about the body and soul. Double entendre.

[Michael Stevens]

I guess I didn't pick up on the double entree!

[Sami Khalil]

The oneness of our spirits. A wonderful write...:)............

[Jamil Isimbabi]

yess the oneness.

[Sami Khalil]

Yes...You are welcome...:)...........................