Idiot

Idiot

A Poem by jamal

I told you not call me that (M)


Why? You ask. (M)


Well.... You will fall (M)


Fall for what ? (W)


Me! :) (M)


don't get cocky (W)


Im not.... Its just honesty (M)


Like I ever will......pff (W)


Your an...... (W)


I say it again, don't call me that (M)


If you do, you will end up saying.....I love you (M)

Who.. Me?  (W)

Yeah... You! (M)

Stop dreaming....... (W)

d****t.....its to late! (M)

huh? (W)

you have fallen for the idiot you love to hate! (M)

© 2012 jamal


Author's Note

jamal
For every girl i ever had a relationship with all call me an idiot for them to understand that they like me O.o .....why use the word idiot O.o dammit im not!

oh yeah lol this from a converstion i had with my ex xD


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This is quite the piece. It is really cute and so warm that it makes me think of all the love vs hate movies where the characters didn't like each other at first but eventually grew into it. Though I was a bit confused with the W and the M at first but overall nice job. ^_^

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jamal

11 Years Ago

Hehe thank you :)))



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Cute poem. Brother, get used to it, the love hate thing only becomes more see-sawed over time!

Keep up the good writing!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jamal

11 Years Ago

Thank you! hehe i am looking forward to the hate and love realtionships in the future :)
This is quite the piece. It is really cute and so warm that it makes me think of all the love vs hate movies where the characters didn't like each other at first but eventually grew into it. Though I was a bit confused with the W and the M at first but overall nice job. ^_^

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jamal

11 Years Ago

Hehe thank you :)))
Haha, I like this. It's different, and really cool. Nice write. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jamal

11 Years Ago

Thanks :)
}Echo{

11 Years Ago

:)

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