unkown

unkown

A Poem by jamal

You speak the opposite meaning then what you already spoken!
Contradiction sparks the flames of provocation
Manufactured identity, cuts of freedom of being open
In and out of different kinds of matrix
Or is it that find yourself caged in
The shadow became the body and body became the shadow
The loss of heart and soul, is the creation of a halo?
No need to rest, no sense to your eyes
Reality cloaked in a labyrinth of lies
Yet if you seek you shall find,
a person that's blind finds the true ability hidden in the depth of ones mind.

© 2013 jamal


Author's Note

jamal
can,t find good title for this piece.... what do you think it should be called ?

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Dear Jamal,

I believe I would name it "Unknown" because you are unsure what to call it. What do you think?

"You speak the opposite meaning then what you already spoken!"

1. Poetry
2. Caring
3. Love

These are the 3 things of which is meant here.

"Contradiction" is the way of the world my friend.

"The loss of heart and soul": beauty within these words. It is your expression.

"labyrinth of lies"

Beautiful depiction of deceit; it reminds me of the film, "Labyrinth."

FAVORITE LINE

"a person that's blind finds the true ability hidden in the depth of ones mind."

1. Blindness is a blind bat.
2. Hidden secrets.
3. Flawed perfection.

love,
ria

p.s. Keep writing, Jamal:D

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jamal

6 Years Ago

thank you soooo soooo much for the wonderful review and i am sorry for the late respond i havent any.. read more



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Dear Jamal,

I believe I would name it "Unknown" because you are unsure what to call it. What do you think?

"You speak the opposite meaning then what you already spoken!"

1. Poetry
2. Caring
3. Love

These are the 3 things of which is meant here.

"Contradiction" is the way of the world my friend.

"The loss of heart and soul": beauty within these words. It is your expression.

"labyrinth of lies"

Beautiful depiction of deceit; it reminds me of the film, "Labyrinth."

FAVORITE LINE

"a person that's blind finds the true ability hidden in the depth of ones mind."

1. Blindness is a blind bat.
2. Hidden secrets.
3. Flawed perfection.

love,
ria

p.s. Keep writing, Jamal:D

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jamal

6 Years Ago

thank you soooo soooo much for the wonderful review and i am sorry for the late respond i havent any.. read more
A splendid read and write Jamal...Thank you for sharing...:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


jamal

6 Years Ago

thank you for takeing the time for reading it! means a lot :)))
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)

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