I despise you

I despise you

A Poem by jamal

I truly despise you!

Your honest actions reaches the depth of the sky,
while my actions stuck on this earth wishing they could fly...
In deep silence I question.... why?
Yesterday and tomorrow forced into internal confliction,
a lifetime sentence imprisoned.
Tempted by own excuse of a rage,
open a window because all I want to do is to escape.
The fool that dreams, forces me to stay.
I want to succeed so bad I fallen astray.
Your shadow covers my path,
is it you or the mirror that taunts me with your sinister laugh.
I despise you for bringing me this curse
I despise you!
Those are my final words!

© 2014 jamal


Author's Note

jamal
We can blame others for our own shortcomings.
because it's easier to point a finger at someone then looking yourself in the mirror :)

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i see a stronger person u in u after soo long....i liked the way u have held ur thoughts completely uniquely!!1 kiddos to u dear jamal !!! continue ur fascinating work!!!

ur friend,
Ganga Ramesh :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jamal

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your kind words! :) and will for sure keep writing ^^
ganga ramesh

6 Years Ago

u r always most welcome :)
A powerful poem Jamal. The shadows of hate cover the path of unjust blame from adversaries....Bravo

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jamal

6 Years Ago

Thank you sami :)
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).................

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