Beauty lies in the attempt

Beauty lies in the attempt

A Poem by jamal

Beauty lies in the attempt,
In a forsaken world,
we find ourselves learning this lesson again.
We can search far and wide,
close your eyes,
fantasy is as real as each failure of each try,
brush the shameful dirt of,
and face your attempt as one of a kind,
in a sea of stars,
future knows stories yet to be written,
the attempt holds them hidden.
The path is set, close your eyes and listen.....

© 2014 jamal


Author's Note

jamal
We can be so set on the finish line that we froget to enjoy the walk to it :)
Take your time and enjoy it!

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i love the title and this entire poem.

you've stunned me.

I'm new on here, so it would be an honour if you could review some of my poems!

Posted 2 Years Ago


jamal

1 Year Ago

Thank you for the kind word im soo sorry im so late i havent been on the site in years! ofc i will l.. read more
yaaaaaaas. dude your just getting better and better

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jamal

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :)
man this poem shows a greater deal of maturity,
future knows stories yet to be written, true, history is in the past future is unknown but whats inside can be controlled.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jamal

6 Years Ago

Thanks man! I am happy you like it :)

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