paper airplanes

paper airplanes

A Poem by jarjarjar

paper airplanes are feeble
they fly when folded
and quickly crash once thrown

even if they had paper engines
to propel and push them further
their hollow frames would
never withstand the pressure
of the atmosphere
that would inevitably
fight against them

they are fleeting
like the three words

you painted in the air
with one of them

© 2012 jarjarjar


Author's Note

jarjarjar
constructive criticism, please! :)

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Added on October 22, 2012
Last Updated on October 23, 2012
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jarjarjar
jarjarjar

United Kingdom



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