pompeii

pompeii

A Poem by jarjarjar

she likened the scene to a fiery pompeii
because when she opened her eyes
it was sunrise...

the sun touched everything with it's divine light in such a way
that the world around her appeared to be in flames

the trees, the clouds, the people, the cars... nothing moved.

and so began the day

© 2012 jarjarjar


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jarjarjar
constructive criticism, please. :)

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Added on October 22, 2012
Last Updated on October 22, 2012

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jarjarjar
jarjarjar

United Kingdom



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A Poem by jarjarjar