adam, my baby nephew

Cut a long story short; my sister had a baby at a young age, 14, she kept adam, but she got kicked out at 16 for all her lies etc, we don't have contact, the only thing i want from her is my nephew.

　

There's no one I can talk to about the way I feel,

I think it's only me that sees this as a big deal,

it wasn't your fault, I just want someone to explain

why you had to leave, and cause me this pain,

she took you away, there was nothing you could do,

I make it sound like it was your fault, but you were only two.

you were an innocent kid, such a beautiful baby,

if only I could see you, just maybe..

..you'd understand just a fraction of how much I cared,

i'd tell you about all the memories we had, the times we shared

who knows how long I spent teaching you to talk,

I remember holding your hands as you learnt how to walk,

your favourite programme was shaun the sheep,

it still makes me laugh, you'd sit there and copy his bleep,

I miss you adam, words can't describe

the way you came and changed my life, and how it became 'normal'

once you left when you were gone,

I couldn't say your name for so long,

it hurt, it really did, I miss you, adam I love you I really do,

you are and always will be.. my beautiful baby nephew..

Reviews

[angel gone bad]

Awww
that is well sweet i really like that

[JayEmBee]

Very moving! Your heart was in every word. I hope he gets to read it someday. Family... Can't live with them, can't live without them. Good luck luv.

[Jessica]

Awww Jasmine, this is amazing. *wipes eye* Seriously Hun this is superb and very very moving. I don't care if there are any errors this is just amazing and very emotional. Well done dear *hugs* this is great
Jessica xx

[ryanfox1992]

Jasmine... my eyes are filling up after reading this :'( i will only see how much you miss him by the tears that shoot out your eyes when we chat about him. No-one will ever know how much pain going through this caused unless its happened to them :/ my shoulder is always here for you baby. I love you xxx

[Ana_Cristina]

awww Jasmine that's really sweet great poem.. almost made me cry you really moved me... :) x

[marshyman]

good first write :)

[R. Nella]

I really like this. I feel your pain.

We had some close friends move away with their young families about twelve years ago, and even though I still visit them once a year, I feel like a huge part of my life is missing not having their kids in my life, particularly now as they are getting older, and they will soon be off doing other things, not wanting to see me when I visit.

[[KL]]

a good write.. despite the spelling errors :P

[zappy]

wow this is very powerful i really like its great i really like it