Sidney the Snail.

in my art book :)

Down in my garden,

Underneath the big oak tree,

There lives snails by the name of Sidney,

And his younger brother Steve,

While Sidney was busy,

His younger brother Steve,

Had an asthma attack,

And coudn't breath

Began to choke on a big green leaf.

Poor old Sidney, what will he do,

Not only was Steve his brother,

But his best friend too!

All on his own,

Full of greif

All because of that stupid green leaf!

It became dark and he was all alone,

So he decided to call his mom on

His new cell phone,

Sharing the news was no good

He couldn't get signal in the neighbourhood.

He let out a scream no one could hear

Sat in his shell wishing to disapear

When it was morning and he awoke

Sidney felt a sharp hard poke

A familar voice sang a soon

Steve's alive there's nothing wrong!

Reviews

[RDOriginal]

Quirky and amusing... Particularly when the advert on the page is for slug and snail killer!

[Jessica]

Hah this is funny and really entertaining. Very good. One thing it is "Couldn't" not coudnt. Reall funny and great as per usual. :) well done.

[[KL]]

it's spelt grief* ;) But like I said yesterday.. It's a great piece =D Really entertaining and fun to read. :P Good work as usual [: