missing you

The sunshine peeks through,

I awake from my bed,
And instantly get flooded,
By the thoughts in my head.

I MISS YOU

I am bombarded with memories,
Each time I close my eyes,
But all I can do now,
Is take a breath, and sigh.

I MISS YOU

Where I once could hear you laugh,
Only echoing silence resides,
Where I once had a friend,
Now I have no one to confide.

I MISS YOU

The press of your lips,
And the warmth of your embrace,
Always made me smile,
And my heart begin to race.

I MISS YOU

I want to hold you again,
Make things the way they were,
Before your mind got clouded,
And everything became a blur

Author's Note

this is how i was feeling when i finally had to give someone up....its hard to say goodbye to the one you like...you want things to work out...but knowing it wont is the hardest part....

Reviews

[Dani California]

Jazmyne,

I can truly feel your pain in this piece. Sigh. I wish I had the cure to heartbreak, because it's high in demand, sadly. Time ... time .... love again. Love cures everything and you'll find it again. And time is a healer as well, it's just waiting it out that's so hard. Choose your music and literature wisely. I'm serious about that... it has a bigger impact than many realize. Happy stuff Jaz... happy happy happy stuff!!! :)

Great piece! Nice structure and flow to it too.

You're growing as a writer...
and you were already good at it... :)

[Norah]

omgee this is sooooooo good! :) keep on writing!

[neanie]

A VERY MATURE OUTLOOK MATE. SOMETIMES GOODBYE IS THE ONLY WAY AND YOU HAVE CONVEYED THIS BEAUTIFULLY. WELL WRITTEN.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wow Jazmyne the power of your feelings are very clear... as of late your poetry has really been nothing short of spectacular and this again shows why

Where I once could hear you laugh,
Only echoing silence resides,
Where I once had a friend,
Now I have no one to confide.

that stanza there really brings the pain of loneliness to a blinding light.
Awesome work again.

[These Haunted Hallways]

Yea, I know how u feel. I can relate as well. It's so hard when things just dont work out. But, in the end, it's a fresh start, and then u get to see new people and stuff, and things will be much, much better down the road. I really liked this write. *Hugs*

B.A.

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

Not one of my favorites by you, but what i do like is how you write with emotin, and never hold back. The end leaves us wondering, "how did his mind get clouded? how did everything become a blur?" Nice job at repeating the I miss you, it emphasizes that you really MISS this guy. I admire you for doing that though. you are a strong woman!!

Kena

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It's always hard to say goodbye but, sometimes, letting go is part of Love, even though it's the most painful part. A sad write. I hope things work out.