Hells bells

Hells bells

A Poem by Jason Nuciola
"

living hell

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Hell bells ring loud and clear.

 

The dark one is coming for my soul.

 

 

There is nowhere to hide.

 

 

No where to run.

 

 

He hides in the shadows waiting to take me to the depths of hell.

 

 

His horns tear through my flesh, ripping and peeling away the skin from bones.

 

 

My blood boils.

 

My heart pops.

 

I am damned!
 

 

© 2008 Jason Nuciola


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Jason Nuciola
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The boldness almost scared me - well done :) I couldn't see all the writing because it was so big, so every line was a new surprise. Your style is very interesting... keep it up!

Kiya :P

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Personally- I thought your style is refreshingly unique
as it freedomly expresses your thoughts unrestricted
this being the battle between hell and the soul
Powerfully invented jason, You did a really nice
I could see darkness and flames in your words.


Posted 11 Years Ago


I think the words and emotion of the poem are strong enough without the large font. Shrink it some. You might be surprised with the smaller font having a greater impact on the reader.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very powerful and scary! I liked it alot ~ Helena :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Powerful poem. I think this is very good. I loved the structure you wrote. Great poem!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wanna makes me stay on the straight and narrow. Powerful words I would shrink the font just a little. I think the bigger font takes away just a little.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I would have to say that in the form that you have this, it does take away from the images and power that could flow through with a write like this.

Break it up a little and i think it would flow much better.

The emotion was strong. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

WOW a very dark piece, I enjoyed reading it though, wonderfully written and I think using the red font gives it mor drama too.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely opening, very macabre write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neat, but would like a little more poetic description there. It seems a bit bland and short as a whole. Need some brimstone spices in there, to spice up the poem, as it were.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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