In Her Eyes

In Her Eyes

A Poem by Jason Nuciola



In her eyes I am stronger.


I can live in her desire forever.


Her look is a blessing as well as a curse.


Her beauty is my fantasy.


I was invisible until I saw her.


That fateful day at the mind eraser.


© 2008 Jason Nuciola

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We do tend to realize our worth when someone else notices it, too. I'm confused by the mind eraser part.. did you lose her just as you found her? A very universal theme... and a joy to read.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Sweet and romantic so nicely expressed and penned~Fran Marie

Posted 11 Years Ago

Awww! This is romantic and warm!
But this is what true love is all about, Great work!

Posted 11 Years Ago

That was really good. Well structured, well written...
I enjoyed it. It's romantic and dark in a certain way at the same time. Yet, it's good enough fo a read or two...
I loved it!! Well done!!! ...keep writing ^_^

Posted 11 Years Ago

that's a very moving poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Futuristic, chilling in a way. Maybe because it brings to mind a story I read here once.

But on another level for many of us love is in the eyes of another.

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on August 28, 2008
Last Updated on August 28, 2008


Jason Nuciola
Jason Nuciola

parts on know, NY

I love to writ my storys more..


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