Blue Eyes

Her blue eyes are like an ocean that quenches the thirst of my heart.

 

 

My reflection is crystal clear.

 

 

I will swim in the ocean of her love for years to come.

 

 

In her blue eyes I can live forever.

Reviews

[BobW2016]

Beautiful, Jason! This is like a nice, long swim in the sea with your beloved one. A romantic tale that makes me feel warm all over. Great job.

[Celtic Cat]

amen. just sounded like it needed an amen at the end. Excellent ode to her baby blues!

[Buddhistboy73]

deep passionate write....like her eyes i imagine. Nice work, short but moving. Like the way you've used the font and colour too. Good work....

[Emily B]

this is beautiful, I hope she thought so too

[Michael X]

Really great poem jason, your profile compared to your work
is simply halarious, brilliantly done.

[Michael X]

lest you drown if she cries... great poem jason, I'm sure she liked it.

[Girlintheworld]

This is a beautiful piece of work. Well done.

I always tend to write in plain old default font but you have proven that colored font really makes a difference in the way the poem comes across when colored. It made my mind wander to ocean blue eyes. Bravo!

[J.Black]

I love this, it's beautiful.

[NJ Schneider]

Very short, but really a great expression of a deep love.

Nicely done.

[Ladysue]

Such a beautiful expression of love. loved it!