Lonely

Lonely

A Poem by Jaxter_Nick

People wont leave me alone but,

I will walk down the street and not a single person would notice me

Its like im a ghost in the middle of a super city and yet they still don't care...

 

I could fall of a bridge and not even be seen, 

They would just keep walking along and breath,

Why doesnt anybody care about me!

Why cant they see that im more than they can see!

They wouldnt even notice if I were to scream!

Once im gone maybe they'll realise what they've lost,

I may not be much but I'm more than what they,ve got...

                            -Jaxter_nick

© 2013 Jaxter_Nick


Author's Note

Jaxter_Nick
I wrote this bcause this is how i feel in my own life because its true nobody cares or notices me.

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A splendid read and write...Thank you for penning...:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


So well written. U r great poet.

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Posted 8 Years Ago


You might edit feel in the last line of the authors note is what I meant to say.

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Posted 8 Years Ago


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Nicely done...No one notices anything anymore...everyone is looking at their phones
and texting. I see you like minecraft...my two little grandsons are addicted to that like I am addicted to the cafe. the only time they talk to me is when they are hungry. ha

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Posted 8 Years Ago


Oh how often I feel that way. But then I write and realize people like it. So then I decide to channel my pain and anger and insanity into writing. Loved the poem by the way

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Posted 8 Years Ago


Jaxter_Nick

8 Years Ago

thanks you for telling me that but its kinda he reason i wrote it
well i have noticed you and your writing if that counts...this is a very honest piece nice job... realize not realise and feel not feal...otherwise it was good

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Posted 8 Years Ago


Jaxter_Nick

8 Years Ago

thanks

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Added on December 31, 2012
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Jaxter_Nick

Akron, OH



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I am a huge gamer who has found a simple likeness in writing stories. The stories come from my imagination in most cases, also a number of my stories are from my language arts class projects. Also .. more..

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