A Night at the Dojo

A Night at the Dojo

A Poem by Jay Steitler
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After a 24 hr dry spell, an itch to write about a personal hobby

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Confidence, courtesy, strength, and control,
that's how the karate student is expected to roll.
With an image as a lethal art, 
enrollment sets the courageous and timid apart.
Down blocks, side blocks, head blocks, and punches.
But basic calasthenics are important,
so don't forget those crunches!
Some nights there's nothing as hard as that bag.
Those are the times for extra effort, and swag.
The stench of sweat. Electricity in the air.
Come join a dojo, if your dare!

© 2014 Jay Steitler


Author's Note

Jay Steitler
Another quick one, prepared like a midnight snack. Not a lot of thought wasted.

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This is short, sweet, and to the point. It has a good energy about it though and would definitely tempt the young and inquisitive. This reminds me of my younger sister, ever the tomboy, who loved karate when she was younger. I can still see her in her gi. Thanks for the memory. :-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jay Steitler

10 Years Ago

Thanks! Glad I could serve up the memory. Unfortunately a couple months on, I'm still without a Gi. .. read more



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Short, sweet, and to the point indeed, as is an invigorating session of Tae Kwon Do, of which I am a very average exponent.


Beccy.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jay Steitler

10 Years Ago

I'll be going for my yellow belt, in about a week. Always great to have the informed view on the mat.. read more
This is short, sweet, and to the point. It has a good energy about it though and would definitely tempt the young and inquisitive. This reminds me of my younger sister, ever the tomboy, who loved karate when she was younger. I can still see her in her gi. Thanks for the memory. :-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jay Steitler

10 Years Ago

Thanks! Glad I could serve up the memory. Unfortunately a couple months on, I'm still without a Gi. .. read more
You deserve a black belt for this unique and powerful poem. You are compacting words wonderfully...:)..............

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jay Steitler

10 Years Ago

Thanks! A black belt is a white belt that never quit! I have a long road to hoe.
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

Wow. Good to know...You are welcome...:).....................

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Added on December 19, 2013
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Tags: confidence, courtesy, karate, strength, manners, sparring, blocks, dojo, bag, courage

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Jay Steitler
Jay Steitler

Penfield, NY



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A bit of a renaissance man, frequent white-lighter, and poet-scholar of life. Love art and photo. Play a little mandolin, and sing. I study karate, and play wheelchair rugby(Murderball). I've read Haw.. more..

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