Heavenly Angel

Heavenly Angel

A Poem by Jaydeskye
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This is my Urenga Parameter for the Albert's Poetry Cafe-Fun with Form Contest.

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Heavenly mother,

you are my sunshine, my reason to live.

You showed so much love.

You have found your place inside of my heart,

I love you so much.

 

You showed so much love.

You have found your place inside of my heart,

I love you so much.

You taught me to love,

you will always live in my heart.

 

You taught me to love,

you will always live in my heart.

You are my angels.

You gave me my very first home,

when you two came down from Heaven.

© 2009 Jaydeskye


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I really enjoyed the format, the simplicity and shortness that delivered a powerful loving message of adoration.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I like the rythme and theme that you use, but I couldn't find myself getting into the poem. Still it's a good piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is beautiful and very touching.

Posted 11 Years Ago


A noble dedication and interesting format.
Well done
Raker

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like it a very good poem
Great Job

Posted 13 Years Ago


such a wonderful poem, made my day.

Posted 13 Years Ago


lovely dedication to motheres!

Posted 13 Years Ago


enjoyed the read you declare your faith openly

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice EXPECT i personally feel its not finished but ya. that's only me and this is your writing so ya.
its very nice.
love the flow
love the words
simply nice

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Jaydeskye
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