Slender Man

Slender Man

A Poem by jayfray
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I wrote this about the urban legend of Slender Man

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Slender Man

Come close my children
and listen well
for there is a demon among you

His name is slender man
tall and thin
and he makes plans to harm you

He has no face
He has no emotions
So if you see him in the night

Say a prayer to lord above
for in his arms he'll snatch you

© 2011 jayfray


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jayfray
I'm unsure about this one =/

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Awesome!

Posted 9 Years Ago


lol
I though you wrote this for slender me...

nice warnin bell for the ki8ds...


Posted 10 Years Ago


this sets a very mysterious and spooky mood - unsettling. Maybe a different word than "harm" in second stanza, a more powerful or scary one? It works as is, but there's a spot you could "creep it up" even more. ;)

Posted 10 Years Ago


6 of 6 people found this review constructive.

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creepy.. lol good write though...
*cocoabean*

Posted 10 Years Ago


0 of 4 people found this review constructive.

I loved it...and I am safe...not that slender. When you write one about a fat a*s superhero, let me know. Good writing, loved it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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jayfray
jayfray

Potsdam, NY



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I'm 18. I study english education and theatre and Potsdam. I mainly write poems, scripts, and i dabble in novels, but I lack the inspiration and motivation to actually finish any i attempt to write. I.. more..

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