My Travels In California

My Travels In California

A Poem by jaywolf1738

In the City of Angels, 
I saw many bright lights. 
A good place to wander,
to get lost in the night.

On the West Coast,
the beaches and bays
relieve me from stress,
and relieve me from pain.

San Francisco,
a strange place to go,
with stores full of chocolate,
and clam chowder served in a sourdough bowl.

I've been around the state,
several sights to see.
I wanna go outside of Cali,
new places for me.

© 2017 jaywolf1738


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I liked California. I loved the sea and the fault line. I free-climbed the fault line often. Many things to see in California. California was slow to me. Now Texas. A adventure for a young person. I liked your thoughts and the description. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I liked California. I loved the sea and the fault line. I free-climbed the fault line often. Many things to see in California. California was slow to me. Now Texas. A adventure for a young person. I liked your thoughts and the description. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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oh dam jaywolf. lol
but seriously, I love all of your writing, not just because your my friend both online and real life, but because you have a talent. You have yet again transported me to San Fran, through the stores full of chocolate, and I love the experience.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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