A LOVE SONG

A LOVE SONG

A Poem by jazzymars
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A LOVE SONG is a lyrics of a song I composed 5 years ago. I recorded it on my own and just play it inside my room sometimes.

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A LOVE SONG


By: JAZZYMARS


 

I can’t explain, I don’t know why

I said I love you, you turned away

You said to me it’s a lie

You were thinking I’m just making a play

 

"Even if, you don’t feel to love me too

All I ask is for you to believe

I love you so much, I love you so much

I love you so much

Don’t leave me behind, I want you to stay

I need you so much

I love you so much"

 

And then when you needed a clown

You came and grabbed me out of the town

Held my hand while you were staring at me

There you kissed my lips and confessed to me

 

"Even if, I don’t show that much to you

All I want is for you to hear me say

I love you so much, I love you so much

I love you so much

Don’t leave me behind, I want you to stay

I need you so much

I love you so much"

 

 

-/ jazzymars

 

© 2017 jazzymars


Author's Note

jazzymars
I hope you like the song, I mean the poem.

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beautiful,,a top ten i`m sure

Posted 3 Years Ago


jazzymars

3 Years Ago

ha-ha.. Thanks for dropping by
Omg!! Amazing! Really wonderful poem! You have such good writes :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


jazzymars

3 Years Ago

Thanks.. This was my first original song compo
PreciousAngel

3 Years Ago

Awesome! Sorry if I'm kinda spamming. I'm trieing my best not to. Love your work.
this is so touching, i felt so moved by the way you used certain words and how you structured the stanzas. the lay out of it is also very alluring

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jazzymars

3 Years Ago

thanks... it was constructed as a song, actually
breakthebrokenone

3 Years Ago

it was so lovely that it works either way. it describes a lot of what love is like, not the things p.. read more
jazzymars

3 Years Ago

yup, and thank you again.. You may try reading also my BEST friends' Feelings. it's a sort story, wr.. read more
This is very sweet and tender, showing a lot of emotion only using a few different words, well done

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jazzymars

3 Years Ago

Thanks you Angel
Sweet sentiment, but a bit too much repetition in the words. Lydia

Posted 3 Years Ago


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jazzymars

3 Years Ago

Thanks mam Lydia. Yes I actually wrote it as a song that's why. Repeated stanza will a part of Choru.. read more
The sentiment in this was very beautiful. Is there a certain melody/tune you had in min if this were a song?

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jazzymars

3 Years Ago

Thanks. Yes Friend. I composed a melody with it. Actually I recorded it on my own. I did not publish.. read more

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Added on July 18, 2017
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Tags: LOVE, I LOVE YOU, I LOVE YOU SO MUCH, LOVE SONG

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