A LOVE SONG

A LOVE SONG is a lyrics of a song I composed 5 years ago. I recorded it on my own and just play it inside my room sometimes.

A LOVE SONG

By: JAZZYMARS

 

I can’t explain, I don’t know why

I said I love you, you turned away

You said to me it’s a lie

You were thinking I’m just making a play

 

"Even if, you don’t feel to love me too

All I ask is for you to believe

I love you so much, I love you so much

I love you so much

Don’t leave me behind, I want you to stay

I need you so much

I love you so much"

 

And then when you needed a clown

You came and grabbed me out of the town

Held my hand while you were staring at me

There you kissed my lips and confessed to me

 

"Even if, I don’t show that much to you

All I want is for you to hear me say

I love you so much, I love you so much

I love you so much

Don’t leave me behind, I want you to stay

I need you so much

I love you so much"

 

 

-/ jazzymars

 

Author's Note

I hope you like the song, I mean the poem.

Reviews

[wordman]

beautiful,,a top ten i`m sure

[jazzymars]

ha-ha.. Thanks for dropping by

[Anmarie]

Omg!! Amazing! Really wonderful poem! You have such good writes :)

[jazzymars]

Thanks.. This was my first original song compo

[Anmarie]

Awesome! Sorry if I'm kinda spamming. I'm trieing my best not to. Love your work.

[breakthebrokenone]

this is so touching, i felt so moved by the way you used certain words and how you structured the stanzas. the lay out of it is also very alluring

[jazzymars]

thanks... it was constructed as a song, actually

[breakthebrokenone]

it was so lovely that it works either way. it describes a lot of what love is like, not the things portrayed in movies where it's all romance, there is heartbreak in love and this show it

[jazzymars]

yup, and thank you again.. You may try reading also my BEST friends' Feelings. it's a sort story, written simply, as in simple and ordinary words.

[Toxic Angel]

This is very sweet and tender, showing a lot of emotion only using a few different words, well done

[jazzymars]

Thanks you Angel

[Lydia Shutter]

Sweet sentiment, but a bit too much repetition in the words. Lydia

[jazzymars]

Thanks mam Lydia. Yes I actually wrote it as a song that's why. Repeated stanza will a part of Chorus or Refrain. ;)

[mae23]

The sentiment in this was very beautiful. Is there a certain melody/tune you had in min if this were a song?

[jazzymars]

Thanks. Yes Friend. I composed a melody with it. Actually I recorded it on my own. I did not published the song, I just did it for fun.