The will or the way

The will or the way

A Story by John Ciarmello
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This is a 15 word short story I entered in a recent contest. I didn't win, but it is the ultimate challenge.

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The will or the way

 

“He’s dead!”

“How?”

“Heart.”

“Policy?”

“Millions!”

“Marry me?”

“Yes.”

“Honeymoon?”

“Of Course!”

“Cliff climbing?”

“Sure?”

© 2018 John Ciarmello


Author's Note

John Ciarmello
A 15 word short! My ultimat challange hands down!

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I love the dialogue! It's funny and fun. Short and sweet but oh-so complete. Well done!

I was actually drawn to your poem from the title, as I wrote one years ago entitled, "Will and Way."

Posted 4 Years Ago


Excellent work John and the honeymoon venue is so funny. I'm sure this is harder than it looks. It reminds me of an advert that is on our TV just now where a couples whole history from meeting to divorce is discussed in about 20 words
Regards,
Alan.

Posted 6 Years Ago


So much is said in so few words.

Posted 6 Years Ago


People in general are equipped to deal with things in more practical way than emotional way. priority is about what is next even before actual funeral services . How much life insurance policy, net worth of assets the dead person left, whom the spouse going to marry, what are the travel plans, and destinations of honeymoon, the world changed a lot that is for sure, thought provoking writing

Posted 6 Years Ago


A lifetime in a few words. Nice use of words. Thank you John for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


The challenge has been met to the fullest. This speaks volumes in few short words. I feel some plot here going on between two over life insurance and romance. Amazing you.

Posted 6 Years Ago


John Ciarmello

6 Years Ago

Thank You Sami. It was great for this old brain lol.
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

Old and smart. Lol
You are welcome, sir.

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John Ciarmello
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I'm a 58 year old enthusiastic writer of short story and Children's rhyme. I love to try all types of writing. I love the challenge of flash fiction. I'm not sure I have a novel in me though! We shall.. more..

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