fantasy Fantasia

The ground sparkles all around, and though my breath is visible I feel only warmth as the crystal flakes fall down,

Never though I could feel this way inside of the season of my dismay,
Its the words she makes without any sound I need her now I don't care if its a second or all day

Her presence is my upbringing the climax of my evening, but then again the attachment is so new, Afraid it will collide in something I may do

Roses grow from the white covered ground, I her her voice and drowned out all other sound this is my fantasia, to forever be bound

Intriguing, indulging, enlightening, It feels like I am breaking, this is reality, a choice set on destiny but in the end is it really me

Reviews

[M.Babu]

You've picked your words well here Joshua...

"Never though I could feel this way inside of the season of my dismay,
Its the words she makes without any sound I need her now I don't care if its a second or all day"

Well executed.
~M.Babu~

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

To me this is like a song - and i like it very much .. it has a few typos but so do most of my writings.. but the meaning , the words- truly love them ..
You have many good lines .. Roses grow from the white covered ground - my fantasia ..beautiful-

Chloe

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

Josh, you surprised me in a very good way. This to me and I being no professional by any means this may be almost one of your best. I truely love this. Great imagery, so much emotion. You really did a great job...xoxo

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Perfectly resounded and uniquely put a well written piece, great read

[Duane Klinger]

Not only do I love the poem itself, I like the syle in which you write. It isn't often you see works with such long stanzas. very well written and stunning imagery. well done!
MKLINE

[Lily Mae]

A deep question to be answered.. I hope you find out and get the answer you want... :) x

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

This is really cute, poems like this amaze me so much :) well done :D