Another Dimension

Another Dimension

A Poem by JoshuaDB

The disbelief of my own dreams has sent me down a spiral twist into another dimension.

This place i thought would never happen has came true and became my biggest fear.

The truth of something that scares me to hide under the things that I say.

The fear of loosing the one "I Love" runs through my mind like a race car going around the track.

someone help as i scream out to the world for this not to come true. stop what is happening, and have it go away.

As there is no way to back to the real world i coop with what is happening. and just pray that this is nothing but a "DREAM"

© 2013 JoshuaDB


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Though interesting and deep, the grammatical errors are distracting from your message. But despite that, I think it's an interesting concept. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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JoshuaDB

11 Years Ago

Thanks Man!

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JoshuaDB
JoshuaDB

Griffin, GA



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My name is Joshua. I've been writing since I was 13. I am now 18. I like short stories and Poetry. and that is what I also write. more..

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