First Love

First Love

A Poem by Just_Joshing
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I found this on my computer the other day whilst rummaging around my stuff! I wrote it back in grade 8, so it's not very refined, but it brings back lots of memories! Enjoy!

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I felt a strange and foreign feeling that morning,

A feeling in my chest, flapping wildly like a dove.

I turned and looked across the room, and I fell without a warning.

I saw your serene face that day, and instantly fell in love.

 

I stumbled and staggered through the dark of hesitation,

Tripped and fell over the many stalagmites of well found fear.

Cursed in silence my lack of needed illumination,

And wound up trapped, bound and stuck right here.

© 2016 Just_Joshing


Author's Note

Just_Joshing
Chill on the critical reviews for this one, I wrote it in grade 8, so it's not going to be the best piece of work!

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Added on September 11, 2016
Last Updated on September 11, 2016
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Just_Joshing
Just_Joshing

Brisbane, Queensland, Australia



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Hi, my name is Joshua Dixon, I'm 15 and I like tennis, basketball and watermelon. My biggest dream is to become a stage actor, and I hope to continue to pursue that ideal when I leave school. I write .. more..

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