Wind

WIND

 

Wind blows through the trees and greets me

Freshens up the forest floor down beneath me

I know Nothing in this world can defeat me

 

When the wind blows

 

I Remember to an ancient time when she loved me

My Memories freshly blossomed all curl around me

Times piles, heaps, and drifts and seeps all surround me

 

When the wind blows

 

I wonder when the Weathers change

Will the wind carry my girl away?

Wordless voices on the swirling breeze

Forever trying to find the source

 

When the wind blows

 

Dusty maps, scattered tracks and the plans we made

Forgotten times within my mind from another day

Her sweet voice calls to me from beyond the trees

 

When the wind blows

 

Thunderclaps I’m startled back and it’s raining now

Wind is gone the forests calm and I’m lonely

The Weather changed my dreams away and her memory’s gone

She’s a dream that visits time again when if and only

 

When the wind blows

Reviews

[Layi Tate]

I love this ... but at the end when it says ...
She's a dream that visits time and again when and if only when the wind blows there should be a conclusion now I'm no writer or critic but that's just what I felt that it needed .

Take it or leave it up to you .... I'm just sharing my point of view