"Black silence"

"Black silence"

A Poem by junaid altaf
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desperate, full of questions, full of anxiety and other associated feelings..........and when a soul with burden just gets a bit closer to nature and sees himself through the eyes of nature!

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black silence touched my soul
as i was thinking about my own thinking

everything seemed to be created
as if singing melodies for their creator

i could feel the reason of my existence
as if realisation was the mother of time

i felt an abundance of joy
as if happiness had pierced my being

the feeling came and vanished like a gust of wind
as if it was a message to keep on living!

junaid altaf

© 2013 junaid altaf


Author's Note

junaid altaf
i felt it , i came home , i put it in the form of words!

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This was really nice and thoughtful.The inner musings of a wondering soul :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


junaid altaf

9 Years Ago

thank you vidya
Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
This is beautifully written, and so very relatable. I quite enjoyed this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

junaid altaf

9 Years Ago

thank you elina
At times... the silent nature of understanding gives us balance... and this verse does that... and once the feeling left you... the motivation kept... lingering inside...

Posted 9 Years Ago


junaid altaf

9 Years Ago

yes it will always be there
Wow..........once again........u rock!!!! :p Well your poem was spectacular in the most amazing manner! Each word defines your emotions, and you can feel every single line!!!! It's truly amazing!!!!! Great job done.......thanx for sharing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


junaid altaf

9 Years Ago

thanks for always appreciating
Flutterby aish

9 Years Ago

Welcome! :)
A highly creative and expltive piece that stands erect, well done, good read.

Posted 9 Years Ago


junaid altaf

9 Years Ago

thanks thomas
Thomas Fitzgerald

9 Years Ago

Your most welcome.
junaid altaf

9 Years Ago

my pleasure
ah..very refreshing...and profound as said by sir tate

Posted 9 Years Ago


junaid altaf

9 Years Ago

thanks
very profound I have had few of these revelations in my life too. A moment of pure clarity.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Tate Morgan

9 Years Ago

Yes it is adreanaline that does it my best works come from similar times when i was desperate
junaid altaf

9 Years Ago

we actually need to get a bit aside from the deceptive world we love to live in
Tate Morgan

9 Years Ago

yeah I suppose you are right

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Added on June 27, 2013
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Tags: keep on living!

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junaid altaf
junaid altaf

srinagar, north kashmir, India



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