One

One

A Poem by J.S. Pua
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My third post.

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-One-

 

Let me be unspoken--in your world,

An absence in each phrase

That you may share.

 

Let me be the least that you can think of

With each breath. And with each breath see

That you were free

Like I always wanted.

 

And I always wanted love,

And truth,

To have

But to never hold:

 

For you are never mine,

But I love you.

And in loving me so--

We are one.

© 2010 J.S. Pua


Author's Note

J.S. Pua
comments very much appreciated.
my third post.

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This was as sweet as the sugar that goes on my strawberries! :D I found this wonderful to read; your message is very strong- as I agree with the other reviews. I especially enjoyed the first two stanzas as it set the tone for this lovely write! Thanks and keep up the writing!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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beautiful. liked this very much

Posted 7 Years Ago


I like this. Sometimes love is so strong that it makes us feel closer to the one we love, even if we never tell them. It's like you fall in love, and let the love affair live on in your heart . . . like keeping your soul on a slow, gentle burn

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is so sweet and ever so lovely! Quite the amazing write. Enjoyed this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Well done. I like your style.

Posted 9 Years Ago


To blend and have that infusion is to feel the balance of love!
Great poem hon
Beautfifully voiced
xx

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is very touching and pleasant. I like it very much.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I think the other reviewers have already pretty much said everything that can be said about this poem. The first couple of stanzas dragged me in and i couldnt stop reading. This was amazing, keep up the good work : )

Posted 10 Years Ago


Yeah if everything was one like this. It's well written and very cute.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This was as sweet as the sugar that goes on my strawberries! :D I found this wonderful to read; your message is very strong- as I agree with the other reviews. I especially enjoyed the first two stanzas as it set the tone for this lovely write! Thanks and keep up the writing!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow. this is perfect. don't change a thing. :) 100/100 for sure!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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