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Poet at heart. Romantic by nature. Nature the style. Styled by experiences. Experience this world that is my mind...
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A Poem by J.S. Pua
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My third post.

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-One-

 

Let me be unspoken--in your world,

An absence in each phrase

That you may share.

 

Let me be the least that you can think of

With each breath. And with each breath see

That you were free

Like I always wanted.

 

And I always wanted love,

And truth,

To have

But to never hold:

 

For you are never mine,

But I love you.

And in loving me so--

We are one.

© 2010 J.S. Pua


Author's Note

J.S. Pua
comments very much appreciated.
my third post.

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This was as sweet as the sugar that goes on my strawberries! :D I found this wonderful to read; your message is very strong- as I agree with the other reviews. I especially enjoyed the first two stanzas as it set the tone for this lovely write! Thanks and keep up the writing!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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that was a good way of showing love original and overall fantastic i liked how u ended it as in loveing me so we are one that was awsome good job :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ahh, your amazing :-)
Lovely Lovely Lovely

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is simply beautiful. My favorite stanza is the second to last, it just strikes me. This is surely going on my favorites list. Great job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is a beautiful poem! I loved it

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is so wonderful,
It's beautiful and so carefree.
Well written

Posted 10 Years Ago


Great design and style..Enjoyed reading it very much..Sunflower

Posted 10 Years Ago


Another great write - wow you have some talent with the written word. Always so bitter sweet, but that's life I guess (well in my experience anyways). I enjoyed this one. Keep writing... please.
Cheers - N.C.A.W.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this excellent writing! although you could increase the size a little bit since it uses a special font and can be a little hard to read at times. but your writing is excellent. great job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Wow. That was great and it flowed together wonderfully. I loved it. Great job. =)

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is very beautiful. Loving is not owning but loving and being loved. Very tender and romantic.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 11, 2010
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J.S. Pua

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