One

One

A Poem by J.S. Pua
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My third post.

"

-One-

 

Let me be unspoken--in your world,

An absence in each phrase

That you may share.

 

Let me be the least that you can think of

With each breath. And with each breath see

That you were free

Like I always wanted.

 

And I always wanted love,

And truth,

To have

But to never hold:

 

For you are never mine,

But I love you.

And in loving me so--

We are one.

© 2010 J.S. Pua


Author's Note

J.S. Pua
comments very much appreciated.
my third post.

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This was as sweet as the sugar that goes on my strawberries! :D I found this wonderful to read; your message is very strong- as I agree with the other reviews. I especially enjoyed the first two stanzas as it set the tone for this lovely write! Thanks and keep up the writing!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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very beautiful - lovely write

Posted 10 Years Ago


Through love not wanting to steal their soul... through this the two souls become one...
"Let me be the least that you can think of with each breath" this line touched me although all of your lines hold true... each line just as touching.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so true about love
good write

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is a very sweet write. (:

Posted 10 Years Ago


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you really have a beautifully phrasing..this is elegant..

Posted 10 Years Ago


i love this..its a beautiful write

Posted 10 Years Ago


Not sure why you aren't confident about this piece, I loved it for the gentle rippling of words across the page and the emotion driven message of love...
Nice work!
Cheers :-)))

Posted 10 Years Ago


ahh..so emotional..the words creates melancholic sound..i wanna cry..

Posted 10 Years Ago


A very passionate piece with feelings beautifully expressed.

Posted 10 Years Ago


this poem is out of this world .

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on July 11, 2010
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J.S. Pua

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