Lonely Skeleton

The high fades down.
The forest hugs my skeleton.
It surrounds me, drying my tears with a brush on the cheek,
"Darling you are never alone."

I look up to the window above the tree branches,
Feeling the spirit entering my blood.
Nature lives inside me.
We are all it's child to be.

I'm a child lost in a woman's body,
Traveling the stars of yesterday.
But suddenly in the stillness of the forest the third eye opens.
I can see too much, its wonderfully frightful.

I shiver with a smile, naked as the wind kisses my legs.
The world is my dangerous playground.
I disconnect from my body,
Joining the world beyond this one.

Reviews

[Johnson]

babe am left in the sky
were my voice cant reach the ear
i drain in tears of amazement
as my mouth could voice with words of surprise
and my hand could reach out to the earth to pen down my pains for the world to see
and when my message could reach down the earth
i had witnesses that saw with me that YOUR AMAZING

[Johnson]

babe am left in the sky
were my voice cant reach the ear
i drain in tears of amazement
as my mouth could voice with words of surprise
and my hand could reach out to the earth to pen down my pains for the world to see
and when my message could reach down the earth
i had witnesses that saw with me that YOUR AMAZING

[B]

Something supernatural here
Or an epiphany

[Nyanachi]

honestly, a bit of both :)

[Chance]

Very nice, liked it a lot. Very descriptive, well done.

[Nyanachi]

Thanks, I been working on trying to describe stuff in a way that makes more sense lol

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Amazing imagery, and beautiful description. Nicely penned.. 😊😊

[Nyanachi]

Thank you so much! :)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :)

[Emily]

I love it!
Well done!
Keep on writing!!

[Nyanachi]

Thank you emily :)

[Amber Lily]

Beautiful, this makes me wish I lived in a log cabin in the middle of the woods, so every morning when I look outside I'll experience exactly what your poem describes. A great write :)

[Nyanachi]

Heheh yeah would be great! :) though the whole energy of city life is fun, there is something really spiritual about being in nature.

[Nikolean]

Enjoyable and well written. Maybe try and avoid using "I'm" ?

[AaronFreitas]

I enjoyed this write Jellycat. I liked the darkness of the write and your descriptions were spot on. Good work :)

[Nyanachi]

Thank you so much, Aaron! :)