Goodbye To Me

Goodbye to Me

Where did it all go?
The days when you waved and said Hello?
Why did you have to leave?
And left me crying in my sleep? 

Refrain:

I miss those days when it was you and me
Lying down under the old oak tree
This independence is driving me crazy

Chorus:

I beg you now, come back to me
Under those skies where we laughed all day
That night, I asked you to stay
Forever you said we would be
So why’d you say, goodbye to me
Goodbye to me

Why did you say
Goodbye to me

I held my heart so tight
As I waited for the moonlight
You caressed me with your hand
And said we would be together again

[Refrain]
[Chorus]

Author's Note

During my 3rd year, I wrote a poem during my Calculus class. One of my best friends, who now currently takes Music in University decided to give it a melody, and this song became known throughout my batch.

It was also the first poem I ever shared with my friends.

So, it holds a lot of memories and I am quite proud of my friend for making it into an awesome song.

So if you'd like to hear it
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xyJslIQ3ybw

I would also love to know what you think about it!

Reviews

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

I heard it. I love the song. Congratulations to you and the one who arranged it.
Keep writing songs like this.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Wow so sweet, :) love how you expressed those sweet words. It is amazing, a brilliant write. I can relate in this story. Very good song. Thanks for sharing.

[Jem Sagcal]

Thank you very much for seeing it that way! Truly appreciated!

[Pax]

a song...awesome!

[Jem Sagcal]

Thank you for finding it awesome, Kuya Pax!

[. - .]

Oh my god.
Lovely song! >.<
Your notes on the song were pretty high *_*
It's a song to be heard :)

[Jem Sagcal]

Thank you very much! Well, it was my friend who made into a song in the first place, and she's really talented at it. :D

[SW..if..TY]

Wow! very very well written! felt the emotion and power behind your words and stanzas!

[Jem Sagcal]

Thank you!

[Areeba]

This is so sweet, I love the way every line connects gracefully to the next!!!

[Jem Sagcal]

Thank you for seeing that way and for the review!