SILENT WITNESS

Something I tried a few years ago........

SILENT WITNESS

 

 

Darkness

A warm woolly blanket

Enveloping the land

 

 

Waiting

Alone yet not lonely

I stand … silent witness

 

 

Gentle

Whispering breeze stirs my hair

Rustles grass at my feet.

 

 

Distant

Stars glimmer… diamond chips in

Shimmering black velvet band.

 

 

Radiating

Slender slivers of light!

Dawn …Red gold tinted.

 

 

Beauty

Unfolding before me

I gaze … transfixed.

 

 

 

©Copyright jen-JG 2002

Author's Note

don't know if this is a particular style or not - I just wrote it as it came... Any and all thoughts welcome.. honesty is good....

Reviews

[radian7]

I enjoy the interesting style, very cool and creative. It inspires me to join in the creativity of the format. A visual sampler box of yummies.

[Brette Medb]

I got so many different things from this. A multitude of images from different seasons and emotions. Great write. I really liked this.

Brette

[Enigma]

Nice Poem.The word choice is great, obviously.And they created very vivid images in my mind.It all was good...
Keep Up The Great Work!!!

[Poeticpiers]

Well wriiten poetic prose clear message easy to read.
Regular line lengths would improve the flow when read aloud metr is essential to make your words flow smoothly

[shadadakiya]

wow that was really good write for sure diffrent good wrork