Laughing Limerick Lovely Logo Lesson

Laughing Limerick Lovely Logo Lesson

A Poem by jen -- JG
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for the "Laughing Limerick Lovely Logo Lesson" contest

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Laughing Limerick Lovely Logo Lesson

 

The lovely logo limerick laughing

Is so confused most people are barfing

The sign says the same

No one takes the blame

And now even the dogs have stopped barking

ã Copyright jen-JG 12th July 2008

© 2008 jen -- JG


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jen -- JG
anything you wish to say - honesty is good

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It's an interesting poem, but it needs some help to become a limerick.
Lines 1, 2 & 5 are supposed to rhyme. Laughing, barfing, barking? Do those word rhyme for you?

Also, the poem seems kind of confused. The logo is laughing? The sign is laughing which is making people vomit? Why are there dogs (barking or not) in line 5?

On a positive note, your black & white picture is really beautiful...


Posted 12 Years Ago


This is so cute - a little confusing - but cute! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I'm not sure what the contest is supposed to be about, but I read the limerick four times, laughing each time, realizing there was nothing hidden.

Well done limerick and it makes sense to me.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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jen -- JG
jen -- JG

Melbourne, Australia



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I enjoy reading, writing and watching movies. There are two adorable cats in our household who give us much pleasure. i enjoy writing poetry of most kinds, rhyme - open verse - and often anything a.. more..

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