Laughing Limerick Lovely Logo Lesson

for the "Laughing Limerick Lovely Logo Lesson" contest

 

Laughing Limerick Lovely Logo Lesson

 

The lovely logo limerick laughing

Is so confused most people are barfing

The sign says the same

No one takes the blame

And now even the dogs have stopped barking

ã Copyright jen-JG 12^th July 2008

Author's Note

anything you wish to say - honesty is good

Reviews

[Lisa Trossarello]

It's an interesting poem, but it needs some help to become a limerick.
Lines 1, 2 & 5 are supposed to rhyme. Laughing, barfing, barking? Do those word rhyme for you?

Also, the poem seems kind of confused. The logo is laughing? The sign is laughing which is making people vomit? Why are there dogs (barking or not) in line 5?

On a positive note, your black & white picture is really beautiful...

[Winter McPherson]

This is so cute - a little confusing - but cute! :)

[Nick Erickson]

I'm not sure what the contest is supposed to be about, but I read the limerick four times, laughing each time, realizing there was nothing hidden.

Well done limerick and it makes sense to me.