A Poem by jen -- JG

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The Exit



On this road is an exit called eight

People believe is an exit gate

Where an arrow points high

Leading up to the sky

What do we do, drive on, or just wait


ã Copyright jen-JG 12th July 2008



© 2008 jen -- JG

Author's Note

jen -- JG
whatever you wish to say honesty is good

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I agree with Teenage Poet about this poem. Has the fun rhyme and rhythm goin' on as well as an interesting message that could be read into it. Clever.

Posted 12 Years Ago

I wish I had something clever to say
I wish there was a better way
To tell you it's as good
As the others I've rood
But there isn't so I'll just say, "Good day."

Posted 12 Years Ago

Very clever! I like this one a lot. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

Short and simple yet still very powerful like there is a hidden meaning behind it.

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on July 13, 2008
Last Updated on July 14, 2008


jen -- JG
jen -- JG

Melbourne, Australia

I enjoy reading, writing and watching movies. There are two adorable cats in our household who give us much pleasure. i enjoy writing poetry of most kinds, rhyme - open verse - and often anything a.. more..


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