My Rose Garden

My Rose Garden

A Poem by jen -- JG

for Alberts Poetry Cafe advances 10/40 words with Tolvi






My Rose Garden



Roses perfume the air

Their splendid form a sweet presence

No place here for oblivion but

A purer happier state where mirrored glass

Reflects the azure sky so gently serene

And two gardeners who

Are lovingly merciful with my roses.



©Copyright jen-JG 7th August 2008


© 2008 jen -- JG

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jen -- JG
anything you wish to say - honesty is good

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A lovely write. You bring us right into the heart of your rose garden. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

Posted 14 Years Ago

This is lovely, Jen :) I did this same 10/40 awhile back but missed the deadline. I love what you've done with the selected words ... wow. Great job! it flows so effortlessly and the imagery you've created is very peaceful. :)

Thank you .. !

Posted 14 Years Ago

A nice, soothing read. I love poetry about nature. Wonderful job :]

Posted 14 Years Ago

Simple beautiful language. this lovely poem made me feel calm.
thanks jen

Posted 14 Years Ago

beauty spiritual

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Added on August 7, 2008


jen -- JG
jen -- JG

Melbourne, Australia

I enjoy reading, writing and watching movies. There are two adorable cats in our household who give us much pleasure. i enjoy writing poetry of most kinds, rhyme - open verse - and often anything a.. more..


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