Intricates of Beauty

I wrote this poem about myself in my best light, at the viewpoint of someone else.

She was as free as free can be.

Mind in the clouds flying with the birds

Feet firmly planted with the flowers

Heart dancing with the wind

She was beautiful.

Not because of what she said or did or anything at all.

She just was.

And that kind of beauty so simple you don't need to define,

Is like looking at a million sunsets and seeing her in everyone.

She just was. 

Reviews

[Bowers]

beautiful creative piece you have written!
she just was... we are who we are..
very thought provoking!

[Emilia A]

A delightful and beautiful read!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is beautiful! :)
I love the way you exude self-confidence in this write..
There is nothing more beautiful than to see what glows within... to love yourself

LOVELY!

Robbie~xoxo~:)

[Pax]

What makes beauty more intricate is being free of who you are, being free from the chains of the past or once was... what is more important is now and how to be a better person than the past... I think beauty is much more define by your heart... short and sweet work my friend, keep writing!

[Saddam]

And that kind of beauty so simple you don't
need to define,
Is like looking at a million sunsets and seeing
her in everyone.
She just was.

Well said dear we must Always chase our dear. Listen yoyr heart.

[Awakened Rose]

Thank you very much! :) This poem was actually about myself though ;)

[Saddam]

Then you are free soul....enjoy your dream dear.

[Awakened Rose]

:) thank you