A New Place

I tip toe around your heart like I can't feel its beat.
Like I can't hear the echos every time I speak.
Like its purity can turn mine black.

I know this is what it seems,
It is.

But whose to say my armor isn't made of gold?
And that my defenses arent merely sold?
When you have made me FEEL.

I know it doesn't seem,
But it is.

How every time I see you, my mind goes to a new place.
How your presence keeps my soul safe.
Falling for you so quick, so slowly.

I know who you are,
I do.

But can you see me too?
Is my heart still blue?
Do you?
Will we...

Reviews

[SmittyJas]

Great poetry was written here and I feel the warmth of the heart.

[Tim Edwards]

A. Metaphors are awesome!
B. I love how invoking your words are without being long winded.
C. It rolls off the tongue so well!

Awesome :)

My only suggestion would be to switch the last two lines, for it reads a bit better in my head, but it is your poem and I wish not to offend. This is amazing!