Leather Jacket

Something I'm still working on..

The sun has been calling my name all week.
Demanding my attention, but too proud to plea.

My soul is warmed by the presence of his light.
Wondering if he's ever fell in love at night..

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

wow! gripping to read ... it has haiku qualities ... i love that you chose couplets .. i really like the play with the sun, warmth and night ... i think this is romantic, playful yet makes me stop and think .. and i love your title ... its a hook and adds another layer to your poem says i! glad i stopped to read .. and ... HI! i go by
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[Michael (Letters and Li..]

So short but filled with such depth! Really masterful!

"Wondering if he's ever fell in love at night." - Beautiful line, my friend. I love it.

The whole poem was just a joy to read and I swear, I could just keep reading it over and over again. Thank you for sharing it with us!

[The Twin Arenas]

The moon and the sun in the most tragic of loves.