weight of the world.

weight of the world.

A Chapter by jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)

it's raining today...


come cuddle me

as we play at angstmonsters;

filling our day with bowlfuls of caresses,

and all the soft dreams spoken

from within our blanketfort

will stay between

(pinkyswears unneeded)

only our two pairs of ears...



© 2010 jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)


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i am always amazed by your words and I always miss them, even more when i forget my passwords to this place and, try for months to find them again. you are truly lovely..


Posted 12 Years Ago


sweet recollections of youth are evoked here...tight and original...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the guitar can set such a mood with simple notes and that clockdriprhythmnoteryhme

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

HAAAAAAA....thats so perfect...and how did yo know that is one of my very favorite videos and songs. You did nothing but justice to it....and for that, you have my status as #1 fan (I know Ed thinks he is but) great job...loved it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i'll bring a flashlight, case we get lost

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)
jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)

Vancouver, BC, Canada



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Playful and eager to explore new styles of writing, and to hone my skills. i'm reaching a point now where i can write a poem and be able to say that it is something i really like. I'm an avid reader, .. more..

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