secret smile.

secret smile.

A Poem by jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)

questing fingers
reaching across a lifetime 

aching smiles 
tracing the curves of a long lost soul

glancing stares 
flickering fevered semaphore words 

dreaming hearts
tabulating the worth of a kindred spirit

and finding the value incalculable

© 2010 jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)


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bravo.. this is passionate, i loved the way you emphasize the intellectual
emotions of romance, the heart is woven into the fabric of the meaning,
the calculated imagery, questing, aching, glancing, dreaming, adding to
and incalcuable worth, such insight leaves the reader seeing colors of wonder

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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aching smiles tracing the curves of a long lost soul..those words said it all :)..succinct and so very beautiful,the depth of the meaning here surpasses the length.

Posted 13 Years Ago


some really incredible word pairings, semaphore words...im jealous lol

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bravo.. this is passionate, i loved the way you emphasize the intellectual
emotions of romance, the heart is woven into the fabric of the meaning,
the calculated imagery, questing, aching, glancing, dreaming, adding to
and incalcuable worth, such insight leaves the reader seeing colors of wonder

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

opening is beautiful... wow, wow, wow... this poem is heaven sent and moving
expressing : universal longing... magical joy grief... memories... the magic of communication... angels doing math ... and the miracle of love...
thanks for reminding me of all these things... and more... in this magic little poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is stunning. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautifully written, dear. Your control with words and how you use them is beyond belief. Well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Whew! This was steamy. It made my skin crawl.
Sensual enough to make you feel guilty as you read
along, but spoken with elegance. Beauty!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love 'semaphore words' and 'finding the value incalculable'.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you see, you couldn't write this if you didn't know it, and that makes your value, incalculable

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this poetry may have more meaning to me, maybe than you jennie-san




Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)
jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)

Vancouver, BC, Canada



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Playful and eager to explore new styles of writing, and to hone my skills. i'm reaching a point now where i can write a poem and be able to say that it is something i really like. I'm an avid reader, .. more..

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