You Rain My Mind

As each rain drop falls,

Penetrates my brain,

My soul only calls,

Futile to refrain

 

From calling out to

Mine own cloud, raining,

Drip, dripping into

The stream now claiming

 

My true consciousness--

Drowning out my whole:

Full of life, dead, less

Than me as you've grown

Reviews

[Amen_Poppies]

This poem is very beautiful. It resonates and the words flow so effortlessly... It lets you imagine it.

[pumpkin head]

deep and powerful read, well expressed