Final Song

Final Song

A Poem by jusjen

Dancing until the sweat pours

Arduous ears mixed with regret

Nameless music keys release sores

Carrying released scars for next set

Empty mind cannot forget

© 2021 jusjen


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I picture losing one's self within the "moment" - sounds, sight strobes, volume, frenzy ...unthinking motion and the flow of Emotion behind the eyes. Letting go unconsciously and moving - just moving - as a release.

Posted 1 Month Ago


this is a wonderful poem. I like how it's structured to define Dance. It's clever and when reading one can't help but visualize the art of dance. Thank you for sharing your poem.

Posted 1 Month Ago



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Added on June 13, 2021
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jusjen
jusjen

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I write from my heart. I follow my instinct. I live impulsively. I never feel like my feet are firmly grounded as I am a free spirit. I am a very intuitive person, sometimes to the point, it hurts me... more..

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