Words

Words

A Poem by Jenny

Thoughts sitting on my breath that
travel across
the sharp vibrations on the tip of my toungue
Words
They dress my mind and furnish my 
heart
build me up and break me down
Words
Articulate gesticulations, actions
kisses
hugs
winks
slaps
Words
are what you wish you wrote and 
spoke
happiness, sadness, tears
laughter
Words
are
words aren't
everything
are they nothing
They are you, and me
They are the beginning
And the end
Words

© 2017 Jenny


Author's Note

Jenny
i wrote this one day on the train after work...tell me what you think

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Elegant and honest write!
Words can either make your day or destroy your day.words come from the heart and flow like lyrics in one's brain.
So, we need to be mentally active before we utter.
I have read several poems on Words but I guess this really speaks a lot.
Applauds...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jenny

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much

I also feel like people take words too seriously. Then again some d.. read more



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Everything here is true about words. And lines are so powerful

Posted 7 Years Ago


Jenny

7 Years Ago

Thank you for the review :D
I hope you got a seat on this train. Otherwise words may have been harsh. It's always the words you should have said that come to you later on. Don't you hate that.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jenny

7 Years Ago

Yes I definitely had a seat that day. I fell asleep after I wrote this LOL

Sometimes .. read more
Jenny

7 Years Ago

OH! and thank you so much for the review!

J
Paul Bell

7 Years Ago

You fall asleep again there. lol
I would say the tone is what matters the most while uttering the words.. It all depends on the mood of the listener too as to how they take it.. Interesting train of thought here. I like the repitition. Really gives off a nice flow to it. Good work ☺

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jenny

7 Years Ago

thank you so much for the review! :)
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Years Ago

You're welcome! ☺
great how you keep using the word 'words' over and over again to give it extra power. beside that i especially like the paradoxes in the last paragraphs. 'words are everything, are they nothing?' and 'they are the beginning, and the end' . really strong writing to explain what words can do to a person

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jenny

7 Years Ago

YOU GET ME!!!! Thanks so much for the review!
@Tony Jordan ...not sure why I couldn't comment on your review; but, thank you for reviewing! ...although i dont have a car so just the train ;)

J

Posted 7 Years Ago


I think you had one very thought-full ride after a very trying day... and you expressed your self very, very well.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jenny

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your kind words!
J
Chris

7 Years Ago

I'm not a "kind" man Jen - just real. You thought-full-y expressed a tough point and the listening .. read more
Jenny

7 Years Ago

kind words can come from anyone ;)

thank you so much for reviewing :)
Nice thought out write. Where would we be if we couldn't use words to express our thoughts and feelings. Valentine

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jenny

7 Years Ago

I would certainly be lost ;)
Thanks so much for the review
J
Elegant and honest write!
Words can either make your day or destroy your day.words come from the heart and flow like lyrics in one's brain.
So, we need to be mentally active before we utter.
I have read several poems on Words but I guess this really speaks a lot.
Applauds...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jenny

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much

I also feel like people take words too seriously. Then again some d.. read more

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