Crumbling

The face I wear to look strong,

Is fading by the minutes after you're gone.

Reviews

[Tim]

Sometimes it takes a lot of thinking to write something this short and make it memorable. You have. Nice

[Haunzwürthe]

My oh my. So few words for such a complex emotion. Shorter works done right often give a more powerful punch than longer poems. You have done that exceeding well.