Vampire's lust over you!

Just another vampire love poem !

      Once again i stumble upon you my love, 

Oh how my fears are gone, 

The night turned into gray, 

I lust upon your soul, 

Your sent is so sweet, 

I must have your soul, 

Hush now, 

Listen to the sound of my voice, 

I flew so very fast and fast to get to you my love, 

Please don't ever leave me again, 

I want you to be my wife, 

Please don't be scared, 

This wont hurt one bit, 

Then you'll be my love forever, 

Yes listen to my sweet calm voice, 

I'll rock you to sleep, 

Then you wont feel a thing, 

I lust over your blood, 

Until morning light, 

Then i'll take you to my den, 

And you'll finally be my love, 

You'll be our queen. 

Author's Note

let me know what you think

Reviews

[R Smith]

I think i like it a lot, this vampire thing you have going on is very entertaining and your writing style is superb thanks Jen :)

[M.A.Rathore]

The fantastic description of vampire's lusty love story.He feels sensation of terrible love with his beloved whom he will enjoy to the drop of blood in her veins making her his dearest queen.....
Fine imagery that we have seen here and it is descriptive in natural sense.
Keep writing your love stories..
Have a nice time!

[Dark Rose]

Amzing I love it. :) such a good writer.

[Ryan Henderson]

Very good! keep the vampire poems coming!

[MomzillaNC]

But, she has no say in the matter… it's the last "Cave Man" fantasy.

[Prabha Salimath]

Lovely and beautiful love poem forever and forever.

[Dipanjan Dutta]

Adorable one. I loved it.

[jennifer little]

thanks for the review

[Dipanjan Dutta]

you are most welcome

[wordman]

loved the vampire theme and just think I can be the queen lol

[jennifer little]

thanks for the review

[wordman]

you are welcome