Fallen into the darkness!

another dark poem I wrote

       I have fallen into the darkness,

My eye's are open wide,

I lurk the night,

Seeking souls to steal,

I want to feast upon their blood,

The human souls must be mine,

I'm a goddess,

The most beautiful of them all,

The Queen,

I'm a vampire of the night,

And I will take your soul,

I will feast upon your blood,

I've come so far and wide,

That I'm so hungry I can not bare to wait no more,

I must feast upon your blood,

Maybe I'll spare your soul,

Or will I?

I want to make you mine,

Please come with me,

Sway the night sky with me,

I'm seeking a king,

A king loyal and kind,

Will you follow?

Feast upon the night,

OH how much I love you,

You must be mine,

Let's feast upon them all.

Reviews

[Starcaller]

I like this one, I love her arrogance despite the fact she is still looking for someone to share her world with. Keep up the good work.

[Kamari's]

Jen this is dark but interesting I honestly love it.

[Confuser]

Jen, I really liked it. The writing is wonderful and the descriptions are vivid - it is a story to me and I wonder if you will or will not. A man named Rudi, is writing a book Bloodrage, about vampires, and more - the bloodrage. You will love it. He is phenomenal! This great poem made me think of it. You could write dialouge for a show about vampires. I can hear these words being spoken. See wht I mean? Let's feast upon them all.

[The Coffee Vampire.]

As much as I love reading your poems it always reminds me why i should be writing! I love this depiction of darkness! Its really alluring. since you have been so kind to keep sending me RR's id like to send you a copy of my book ive been working on for about three years. though that will have to be after editing lol anyways great right!

[LadyNaida]

No doubt you are intrigue by the vampire ways. Nice read.

[SmittyJas]

Oh the secret bit of the vampire and his blood sucking ways He has been this way for centuries many foes he and slated put them on a cold slab and drank their blood every last drop. In my humble mind I must say I have no use for vampire's from centuries ago to this very day.

[DoormanDan]

Writers like you are the exact reason I absolutely LOVE dark poetry so much! This is one of the finest examples of dark poetry I have ever read. Hats off to you, jens books!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i am glad i rose out of my coffin to read this...a tasty vampire poem---warmed my blood.

now back to bed,

jacob

[Fran Marie]

A dark vampire poem ..chilling and well penned

[Matching Socks]

Very cool poem, dark. I love it.