Feeling so numb!

Feeling so numb!

A Poem by jennifer little
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just a dark poem by me again

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   I feel so numb,

SO hopelessly lost,

My soul cannot bare this no more,

All the pain,

All the regret,

The mocking,

The cursing,

When 's it all going to stop?

The hatred,

 I feel so numb,

SO cold,

I don't know what to do anymore,

I cannot sleep,

I cannot eat,

All the day's are gone,

 

  I feel so numb,

So hopelessly lost,

As if I have no soul no more,

My tears begin to fall,

I am not me no more,

My skin is so pale,

I feel so cold,

My heart beats no more,

I feel the erdge of feasting upon blood,

Who am I?

What am I?

What have I become?

All hope is lost,

I am a night walker,

A vampire of the night. 

© 2014 jennifer little


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I love how the start of your poem grabbed me and kept me reading while you showed raw emotional power and how the vampire thing was unexpected I still loved and I love how you sew the despair and sadness of the power with the self loathing the vampire has for itself.

Posted 6 Years Ago


You got me, the lovely poem it is; the vampire crept on up me. I attention frozen to it, so full of emotion and sadness, and then you hit me with it! Thank you. Loved it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


first of this kind I have read and really loved reading it...:))

Posted 6 Years Ago


You have your own style here(which is an extremely good thing to have). I absolutely loved reading this poem. If I could, I would give you ten thousand rounds of applause. Keep on sharing your beautiful, dark writing with the world!

Posted 6 Years Ago


nice theme love your wording, I absolutely love the way you wrote about the transformation

Posted 6 Years Ago


I feel so cold,
My heart beats no more,
I feel the erdge of feasting upon blood,
Who am I?
What am I?
What have I become?
All hope is lost,
I am a night walker,
A vampire of the night.

A little typo with urge but another great vampire write. You are master of theme and your structure is always spot on.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Wow you have a natural outlook on vampires nice work!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nice flow of thoughts leading to the strong ending. Easy to become a vampire. Lose the drive and the will to live in the light. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


I like how you start it off!
Well done!

Posted 6 Years Ago



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jennifer little
jennifer little

Coldwater, MI



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