a dark moment in time

a dark moment in time

A Poem by jennifer little
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Just a dark poem I wrote

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     As I sit here with my long black hair,
In tears of blood, 
My eyes so furiuse,
There's a black castle full of darkness behind me, 
My soul is lost,
Spiders and Mice creep around me,
Oh the horor,
I have no where to go,
No where to stand, 
No where to hide,
My world is so dark and cruel,
I feel so cold, 
I'm so helpless, 
There's no love for me anymore,
Help me,
Help me,
Oh dear god,
No where to turn,
I'm left in the dark,
Left for dead,
Left here alone to die. 

© 2015 jennifer little


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jennifer little
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I could see something mystical and mythical about this poem. Definitely unique.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Interesting soul exploration. Very dark. It gives off the feeling of being crushed.

It's hopelessness written in a beautiful way. Great work!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Very dark indeed! I like the way you captured the very darkest of moments!

Posted 5 Years Ago


It is a very dark write and I think the repeating of the key words "left" and "help" really bring through the feeling of helplessness and loneliness...keep writing!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Sometimes in life we go through situations that might make us feel like we have been left along in the dark with nothing but the silence and ugliness of a broken heart.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Very mccob I love it a tear of blood just so wow

Posted 5 Years Ago


I also like the image of the dark castle! Reading this, I imagined a princess standing out on a balcony, searching for stars beyond the clouds. Her prince is gone and she has nothing left. To imagine such loneliness...such longing. I admire the depth of emotion you put into this.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Hard place to be in... there is always a way out but sometimes we can feel there is no-one and nothing that makes sense anymore, no-one who loves us... you've expressed it well... I like the image of the dark castle behind you... looming, ominous.. well done!

Posted 5 Years Ago


You are loved by god and that's why you are here. Feel that love and then you would see the light at the end of the tunnel.

Posted 5 Years Ago


sometimes we are in these time but faith help to recover all those..a very good write:))

Posted 5 Years Ago



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jennifer little

Coldwater, MI



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hi im jen i am a single mother of a 2 year old baby girl I have some books published already heres the link spread the word http://www.lulu.com/spotlight/jenniferlittle673 i have a blog on www.. more..

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