Destiny awates

poem i edited this poem let me know if you like the first or second version better

 first version 

                        Our destiny awaits us, 

                         Make heaven your home, 

                          There is a path to heaven, 

                       Serve God and you'll see the Glory, 

                      The path is so wide, 

                       There's angels waiting for you to enter, 

                       There's golden gates, 

                          bridges, 

                       The beauty is so clear, 

                       The angels rejoice, 

                        As we enter the kingdom of God

  second version 

            destiny awaits 

our destiny awaits us as we walk upon this earth, 

as we wait to meet our maker, 

our path is to heaven, 

serve God and you'll see his glory, 

Heavens path is open wide, 

he's waiting patiently for his children, 

there are angels all around, 

cant wait to see them golden gate bridges, 

the beauty is so clear, 

the angels rejoice, 

as we enter the kingdom of God 

     

     

Author's Note

just another poem let me know what you think

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[John Alexander McFadyen]

A passionate and flowing call to gods arms.