Set free

another poem religious one i redid this one as well let me know if you like the first version or second version better

     original version 

                     The angels rejoyce, 

                      The angels sing, 

                       They have a new child of God, 

                     Peace within, 

                       Glory to God, 

                       You've been set free

    second version 

     set free 

   the angels rejoice, 

the angels sing, 

they have a new child of God, 

peace within, 

i am set free, 

a new child of God, 

glory let it rain, 

you've  been set free

Author's Note

another short poem let me know what you think

Reviews

[Meliss@k]

Gosh I love this.
Beautiful. Calming. Yet- exciting in a spiritual degree.